Sunday, 1 February 2015

Strolling alone in winter

February month has started here in India, signalling the near end of winter season but strolling alone while the cool breeze is passing by, is an amazing experience described below:

Opening the closed doors and feeling the cool breeze passing by,
She decided to step out and stroll alone under the dark sky.

Thinking God was trying to signal her something through breeze,
She smiled, unprotected, without even caring if she would freeze.

Observing the dancing leaves and staring at twinkling stars in the sky,
She thanked God for His wonderful creation and praised Him high.

Looking at her long hair, flying with the current of air,
She thought of someone special who would really care.

Sensing the goosebumps and looking around the lonely street,
She felt enthralled, hoping if there was someone to meet.

Realizing that commencement of Valentine's day was near,
She imagined embracing her valentine, without any fear.
Submitting to Poetry Jam- Tis the Season
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16 comments:

  1. Mary1 February 2015 at 07:10

    This has a very nice reflective tone....and I like the looking forward to Valentine's Day!

    I am glad you decided to share your poem. Hope to see you again. And, I hope you will visit other people's poetry here at Poetry Jam as well....as this is a way to get to know others and become part of the community.

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    1. Unknown1 February 2015 at 09:14

      Thanks a lot Mary :) Yes, I would like to continue sharing my poems and reading other's too. Glad to know you!

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  2. Brian Miller1 February 2015 at 09:28

    smiles...its a wonderful love that we can share, when we approach it without fear....i love how you built the scene and used the empty streets to convey feeling and set up your closure...very nice...welcome to poetry jam...

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  3. Unknown1 February 2015 at 09:42

    Thank you :) I am glad to be a part of Poetry Jam.

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  4. Gabriella1 February 2015 at 11:02

    I like how stepping out made her reflect on love and the season. Welcome to Poetry Jam!

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    1. Unknown1 February 2015 at 11:33

      Thank you Gabriella :) I am glad you liked it.

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  5. Peggy1 February 2015 at 11:14

    Welcome to Poetry Jam. It is the perfect sized poetry group to start sharing your poems online. I enjoyed your February walk and hope there was a Valentine out there!

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  6. Salvwi Prasad2 February 2015 at 03:20

    Glad to see you here. This is definitely a lovely writing narrating the season and its impact on the protagonist. And love, that is so much dear to February. :) Keep writing !

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  7. Unknown2 February 2015 at 06:27

    Thank you Salvwi for your encouragement :)

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  8. Mandeep Jain4 February 2015 at 22:21

    Nice you put up a piece of your creation,
    A small part of your growing passion,
    Read your poem and found it cute,
    Accept my humble salute :)

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  9. Unknown5 February 2015 at 05:54

    Thank you Mandeep for your lyrical lines,
    I am glad you liked my attempt at rhymes :)

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  10. Unknown9 February 2015 at 01:04

    Glad to see u on Poetry jam. I dint thought u r such a wonderful poet.

    She is as humble n sweet as her poem

    May God Bless you for such great workings n continue sharing

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  11. Sanaa Rizvi13 April 2015 at 13:10

    Thinking God was trying to signal her something through breeze,
    She smiled, unprotected, without even caring if she would freeze.

    Our faith in God defines our ways... as the belief makes us positive and urges us to become even better in life :)
    Beautiful poem...!!
    xoxo

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  12. Unknown14 April 2015 at 02:50

    Thank you so much Sanaa :) Yes, that's the unwavering faith in God which keep us going :)

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  13. abc14 February 2017 at 07:40

    Very nice Priya..Keep it up.
    Devangi :)

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